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Stationary for the festival's organization's sake.
I'll soon be posting uniforms, tickets, id's and signs of the festival.

College work, I'll be happy with critiques. =)
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Given 2005-09-05
Utopia Stationary by ~RaphaelAleixo is what i'm sure most corporations wish they could have laying on their desks. A great sense of style and a straight forward design that relates directly to the subject and location make this set of stationary very professional. ( Suggested by `picard102 and Featured by `bornghost )
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Esse projeto ficou maravilhoso. Baixei o manual e achei muito bom, inclusive no momento estou fazendo um também. Devo postar no DA daqui a umas semanas. Te adicionei por aqui, ok? Abraço!

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Graphic Designer graduated on IFF Campos College (Rio de Janeiro, Brazil)
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really good job, i have your PDF of the identity corporate and is great (sorry for bad english )

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~poisonfrog Sep 6, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
Well it seems everyone stole my comments before I got here! Here's a summary though ;) Nice job.

-The black envelopes look neat, its a great color combo, but... impractical. It's also tough to change a color scheme so drastically and still keep uniformity in the design.

-I noticed on the back of the small black envelope, the bottom has a swirl of blue the same shade as that on the small white envelope. Since you didn't use that color anywhere else on the black envelope, it struck me as a little strange.

-The business card would be better one-sided, but if you keep it two-sided, I'd switch the logo and information so that the logo had both colors of blue swirl with it (eye-candy) and the info just one color (business).

-The logo is very unique and memorable, by far my favorite part of the whole layout! It reminds me of a swan/harp, perfect for a music festival :D

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"I've knocked my inner dork askew...
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:iconraphaelaleixo:
Thanks a lot for the comments!

1) The Black envelopes were planned to use only to formal, internal correspondency. It was thought to be used with adesive tags, with the adresses on it. But after all o fthis comments, I really think it would be better to keep the white version only, for both envelopes.

2) Hmmm... Yes, I made a mistake. =/ The front of the small envelope should follow the scheme of the big one.

3) I REALLY didn't like those bussiness cards. It was a college work, I was on a rush to finish everything, and the Cards ended up far from what I expected. But thanks for your considerations. I'll improve them, for myself, as soon as I can. :)

4) Thanks. If you have time, check it: [link] and [link]

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Raphael Aleixo - WebDesigner | Brazil
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~poisonfrog Sep 8, 2005  Hobbyist General Artist
yah, i understand trying to get work done under a deadline in college! Despite all the critiques, this really is good work, and does strike me as something that would actually be used. :)

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:iconmitchcage:
:O Wow! I want that folder :D So purdy.

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:iconraphaelaleixo:
Hahaha. =)
Thanks. ^^

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Raphael Aleixo - WebDesigner | Brazil
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:icon4degrees:
As a graphic designer at our local printing office (not that this makes my comment any more qualified) I gotta say, great work! =D I especially like the letter with the logo on the right side, you hardly see that in office letters! One thing I don't like too much is the folder's mirrored design, I'd let the stuff on the front side continue on the back side, just an opinion though. Maybe the comment about the color was right, blue doesn't quite stand for music and at first sight reminded me of water (especially with the wave-like design), but then again, what color does stand for music anyway?... The envelope could get you in problems regarding the postage signs, but I don't know how that is in your country so I can't say anything. Good job! =D
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:iconraphaelaleixo:
I have to say that I do also don't know about the postage signs. =/
I'll check it. Ah, and I'll try to make the folders as you said it. As soon as I finish, I'll warn you. :D

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Raphael Aleixo - WebDesigner | Brazil
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:icon4degrees:
Here in my country, lil' Austria that is, the mail offices are very sensitive about the placement and the size of the postage signs. :constipated:
Anyway, glad you like my idea, can't wait to see what the final product will look like! =D Keep it up!
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